觀察2013大作文圖片可以得到以下的相關(guān)信息：

　　圖中的年輕人為大學(xué)生；2.走在路上，目標(biāo)眾多。

　　在文都的課堂上，我們強(qiáng)調(diào)"描述圖片：抽象為主"的描述原則，所以在面對(duì)此圖片時(shí)，我們可以將其歸類于六類主題中的"人的成長(zhǎng)"，即"在路上的年輕人"的抽象含義。而多條道路就是，成長(zhǎng)中的選擇和機(jī)會(huì)。

　　所以，描述圖片人物可以使用，詞匯較為簡(jiǎn)單的"young people"，其余的內(nèi)容可以使用六大類詞匯中的成長(zhǎng)內(nèi)容，進(jìn)行寫作。如：confidence、Attainment、achieve attainments、striving spirit、surmount the difficulties等即可

　　在此再次強(qiáng)調(diào)寫作的相關(guān)要點(diǎn)如下：

　�。�1）描述圖片：抽象為主；（2）說(shuō)明現(xiàn)象：會(huì)寫為主；（3）分析原因：靠譜為主；（4）建議對(duì)策：普通為主。

　　結(jié)合授課內(nèi)容以及六大主題詞可寫出范文，如下:

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, many young people are standing together when they find that there are so many ways to go.Thus，all of them are stopping there and waiting for help. Obviously, it is the shortage of confidence for their future that makes it impossible for them to get the attainment they want to.

　　Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce and there are more and more chance for us to get. But it is impossible for the ones to achieve attainments if the ones have no striving spirit to surmount the difficulties. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on the striving spirit. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of fighting is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.

　　To my way of thinking，the problem that all of the college are just stopping and waiting but no fighting and thinking will generate severe consequences .Measures should be adopted before things get worse.It is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to make young people change their outlook of life and acquire determined spirit. Only by this way is it reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future